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RE: Creative Writing Challenge - Task #3 - Our new home

in #writing • 7 years ago (edited)

Nice story indeed! Kids like daydreaming. I loved it. I think it's balanced well, but I've already said, I'm not a professional writer or a literature critic. Title is good enough as well.

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     7 years ago 

    Thank you very much! Oh, feedback is always appreciated. Glad you liked it.