Wrath of Zeus (Original Composition)
Thunder roar and Lightning strike!
Let those who boast tremble at my might
For I am the only bearer of light
With my hands, I shaped you all,
Yet you still seek to see me fall
Now cower in your homes, fortify your defenses
For nothing will prepare you,
of the chaos you are about to witness
I am thunder cometh, lightning incarnate
My power is without limit
And my presence omnipotent
I am without age and without blood
No mortal can kill me
That you know well,
Only a god can kill me
But I rule them as well
So abandon all hope
And prepare for damnation
There is nowhere in this world where
You could find salvation
Weep now and fend for yourselves
For I am coming with wrath unwitheld
My rage and fury will hit like a comet
For I am thunder cometh, lighting incarnate
End
It's great, but you have some problems with small i and capital I in middle of lines.
Ohh wait.okay haha sorry. I will get to it right away. Thank you @readingdanvers !
I was doing steemit on my phone on the way home. Thanks for pointing it out.
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Nice work.
What inspired you to write a poem about Zeus?
thanks!
dota? hahaha. i just hate it when people complain about the government and refuse to change themselves first.
I imagine zeus being fed up with all the complaining and just wipes the world clean. haha
Really great and original!
Thanks for sharing :)
thanks!
This is great! :D Keep writing!