I love the fact that phalem's dad was happy he is going to see his wife again but I feel for phalem because he is going to be all alone and starting life in a new place, that can be lonely ....i love the happy and sad ending... Nice story!
I love the fact that phalem's dad was happy he is going to see his wife again but I feel for phalem because he is going to be all alone and starting life in a new place, that can be lonely ....i love the happy and sad ending... Nice story!
Thanks! I was aiming for an optimistic yet lonely ending. Glad you enjoyed it.