Holy...
...shit.

Reading this, I'm not sure who I am more eager to see dead: Ramogoth, or Dankirk. I'm thinking Dankirk, after some thought. Ramogoth is a slaver, a pedophile and a serial rapist, but Dankirk is all that as well as a cannibal. I get the feeling Drevin sees the priorities differently though.

The thing that jumps out at me here is when Lucia starts apologizing to Drevin, saying "I tried to prevent him from taking what's yours." Even after what had to be a mind-breakingly traumatic experience, her thoughts are for Drevin. I don't know if that's a sign of how passionately she loves him or how subservient she is, or both, but it's the final nail in the coffin of the most jaded reader's stoicism. It's enough to make any man who reads it respond the way Drevin did, if he wasn't already.