Mentor, with much sincerity Sir, both parts are emotionally arousing. Personally, I was taken beyond reading sense to an imaginative world and I found myself in the narration. I knew things were not fine when she received a call that triggered tears. "..Grandma Please, tell me what’s going on!!” I cried She was having difficulty speaking in general."
I felt the pains on hearing the news about dad and mum who got involved in an accident and I wished it had never happened. No one would dare be happy at hearing such news for no one ever prayed to lose their loved ones. I was totally dumbfounded and in suspense when you ended part one. Nevertheless, I was eager to know what actually happened afterwards. (sighs heavily), part two came as anticipated but not as expected. It's so deep and another journey into an emotional provoking moments, full of pains and unrest of the mind. Seriously Sir, it's not easy to have been kept in the dark professionally by the doctor who never gave a definite conditions of both parents which you decoded the encoded message and was so careful relating such message to others as that may triggered another impromptu occurence. I became extraordinarily nervous and wanting to know more about their welfare and I cant wait to read the concluding part and make my conclusive reply. Without doubt mentor, I commend the family for the courageous act displayed because such alarming situation won't be lightly managed by others.
You are good at what you do boss and am so glad to have met you here, for I know that I'll improve more with time. I look forward to reading the concluding part soon and be relieved of this tensed state of mind. Thanks mentor.💞💖💞