You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
RE: Lovestruck - A Bloody Modern Fairy Tale - Part One
I'm glad I slipped into this little pool of darkness. The whole thing feels...sinuous to me. Like the entire story is a snake and you're just following it along to the tail...or the head.
Love the use of word treatments and little turns of phrase. Jane the Baptist, the trying-to B-cup, etc.
Great read, and the second installment should be great as well.
Thanks so much Neg! I'm already just about done part two so keep an eye out ;)
I've been keeping an eye out for part 3. Please oh please, I hope you find the time, the peace and quiet, whatever you need to get those words out. It's such a great story!
Lol, thank you Carol, you'll be the first to know, I promise ;)
I'm hoping to find time in between coats of paint in Lily's room this weekend, but there's so damn much woodwork by the time I finish one it's time for the next. Four. Four coats is what it's taking to cover up the old water stains sigh.