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RE: ADSactly CrowdStory

in #writing7 years ago (edited)
  1. Dant sits back down, his expression dull, eyes faraway.

"Dad?" Jess presses.

"Oh! Hey there Sweety, you stop by to see your old man?" Dant responds, a glee in his words.

Jess can't help but be perplexed by her father's sudden shift. She stands staring horrified at the cheerful old-timer in amidst the ruin of his outburst. She'd heard the noise complaints from neighbours, always thought it was just her Dad's way of filtering out the war - but this, this was much worse than a flashback - something was happening here, and she knew it was just the beginning.

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nice! i like your writing style!

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