@bycoleman $45 SBD steemit writing contest-My entry: "COSTLY MISTAKE"

in #writing6 years ago (edited)

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The story begins in a perfect Friday morning while everyone was happy that it was a weekend. Tracy called his mom that he's gonna see a friend on his way he met a beautiful classic lady called Janee. Janee was 25 while Tracy was 27 by the time they met each other. Tracy talked Janee in into a relationship which Janee accepted his proposition to be his favorite partner. The game begins it was a lovely scenes for the two partners and lover. Ceaser is a handsome and rich guy living in the same street with Janee she doesn't like him because he's proud Caesar does not let like her either. You are like a morning star beautiful as peacocks and gentle as dove.. I blessed the first day I saw you, I wish to draw back hands of clock just to tell you I love you again. Said Tracy..... Hmmmmmm my crown my only one, the opener of my happiness great are you I won't love you again but I will always love you replied Janee.

After 5 months of dating the love was hot and full of respect. ''if things are going as planned just give it a time to know the true test." Janee was leaving her state for another state in order to write a masters scholarship exam she went with a good friend of hers .on their way she felt dizzy and was taken to the hospital at the hospital it was confirmed that she was pregnant she started soliloquicing ...(ahhh how did this happen to me ? why pregnancy? we used protection how do I tell Tracy? what trouble have I gotten myself into? It should not be me...... well abortion is the best solution to avert this shame)..

 when she got home she explained to her friend has it happened with the guy responsible for her pregnancy.................   My friend I never knew I could fall for his tricks Ceasaer was never my choice but I end up having pregnancy for him.  Tracy truly loves me but he's not rich .Shut up!

someone loves you out rightly yet you betrayed him Janee cut in ... please don't blame me what is the solution I think I have to go for abortion but do I need to inform Caesar? yes of course replied her friend. She picked up her phone and called Caesar she explained to him and he laughed yes I knew it.. Oh! My baby. My baby must live and survive what if you die in the process of abortion.. Dear, leave it alone I will carter for you and my baby. Janee replied hell nooooooo.
I have Masters program to undergo, I have to set some things in place before going. Cesar laughed again you must be kidding, all you have said is none of my business keep my baby and keep my p***y...
Angrily Janee dropped the call, Tracy called as usual to ask about her journey but she was just stammering in her response.
Tracy asked hope no problem dear? She replied I'm just tired. Oh sorry dear, I believe you did justice to the exam. thank God replied Janee. Can we go out tomorrow asked Tracy. Yes when I'm back but with a friend? No problem said Tracy.
At the eatery Jane introduced her friend to Tracy, Joy by name Tracy is a jovial and hilarious guy which got the utmost attention of Joy. Jane was not really happy because she was pregnant, she is not in love with Cesar and the man she was in love with had not seen her nakedness not to talk of having sex with her, how will I just say he is responsible..... Janee was thinking about all this when Tracy kissed her wrist to draw her attention back. what is going on Janee is everything okay? of course replied Janee. Tracy cracked a joke which got Janee, she forgot all her thoughts and started laughing

Joy was neither laughing nor smiling but was thinking about helpless Tracy whose love had been hurt, whose love had not been truly protected whose love should be giving to someone else other than Jane. All these was going through her mind as she developed a feelings for Tracy because Tracy was very lively, Tracy got the attention of the two ladies with his jokes before they left. At there departure Tracy said, Janee my love
I'm Mortal man
that matters in the altar of immortal
with the hope of becoming immortal
to protect the love of my life.

Janee began to shed tears as his words went through her brain causing her sensory impression to organize beyond Tracy's comprehension, Joy was not happy for she knew little of the reasons why Janee wept Tracy kissed her as he departed.
why on earth will Janee do such thing to Tracy? Joy began to reflect on what happened at the eatery, she chuckled....I can help Tracy out by giving him my heart, she concluded in her thought that she will seduced and have Tracy.

Janee was just confused, she did not know what to do. Joy prepared food and drinks which she added pill inside Janee's drinks. she told her to come and eat, they ate together, after some minutes Janee started having stomach pain before two minutes she started bleeding, Joy took her to the hospital, the doctor cleaned her womb cause she just lost her baby due to miscarriage jyoy was happy because it was a succes it will favour her, Janee was still in dark, she did not know what was going on Joy began to move closer to Tracy butTracy was not really interested in Joy.
Joy told Tracy that he should spear her some minutes

that she wants to see him. Tracy gave her his address and they had a deal. Janee went to Ceasaer place and explained what happened to him Ceasaer was furious about it why would you kill my baby? I never did anything bad. Believe me just this Once Ceasaer accepted her plea and told her to leave that poor boyfriend of hers and concentrate on their relationship he told her how much he now loves her but Janee did no alter a word she was just weeping

Joy tried all the seduction mode she could but yield no positive results for her as Tracy kept on saying Jane will satisfy me when it's time; for the last time that Tracy repeated the statement Joy laughed and said "Tracy, I'm trying to give you the true love you deserve I'm trying to redeem your love from Seoul back to life I'm trying to be that immortal woman that would stand for and wait for your protection but I'm not your Janee that will love Tracy and be pregnant for Caesar.
what do you mean by that Joy? But joy walked out of his sight.....Tracy began to reflect on what she said but never got it right. Caesar copied Tracy's contact on Janee's phone while Janee left he called Tracy and threatened him to leave Janee.

Tracy never knew Ceasaer he was scared he thought of it that Joy set everything up cause she mentioned the same name while she was leaving he also thought of it.. what if this person is not joking.. Well I will discuss with my love Janee.

After 3 days Tracy surmouned his courage and asked Janee about all but Janee denied, Tracy begged her for not trusting her as she was begging Ceasaer called TracyHe picked the call and put it on loud speaker for Janee to hear them clear.. Janee went down in tears
that it was the hand work of the devil.

I love you Tracy I don't just know how it happened please forgive me Tracy smiled and said Jane my love you hurt me but no problem I have forgiven you he left Janee with tears ..
Confusingly he gave Joy a call which she was happy to receive after some minutes she went to his house where they dine and wine together and had a fantasy sex section..

Tracy was not satisfied at first but Joy's love creeped into his heart and he loved Joy than Janee for Janee betrayed him.

Janee was not feeling good emotionally although she caused it she tried to reconciliate with Tracy but Joy's love had replaced Jane's love in Tracy's heart. Janee thought about the time with Tracy and the greatest mistakes with Ceasaer that will only yield money and sex but not bothered about showing care Janee wrote a letter to Tracy wishing him well with jyoy as she poisoned herself.

Tracy wept as he heard about Jane's demise.

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