Until the mid of the story, i was thinking that taylor is a girl 😛😂, until u told he was his brother. Anyway! Waiting for the next part.

Seems like u have a good knowledge of business as well since you mentioned the way viktor studied about zack. That was nice.

Also the quotation by @alienbutt was very impressive 😃. I have recently started to write fiction as well, so it got me 😃.

Nice work 👏🏻