RE: The Third Adventure with Peter Pan

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grammarnazi (5)in #writing • 7 years ago

You have a minor typo in the following sentence:

Her stomach was left somewhere on the ground in on of the ups and downs of the swing.

It should be one of the instead of on of the.

7 years ago in #writing by grammarnazi (5)

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defenderofman (29) 7 years ago

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