The story is original, very good, and well told
It's even more impressive that you express it so well in English when it's probably not your first language, and because of the nuances a direct 'verbatim' translation wouldn't work.
Very talented and I look forward to hearing more from you
P.S. I've already written 2 AI stories that I'll post on here, so I hope no body thinks I've grabbedc any of your story for mine