My first post on enlgish | #writing

in #writing7 years ago

Hi! Everyone. I trying to learn english so I decided start to write my posts on English, withou translate or spmething like that. So, this is my first post.


A litte poem, so...

You told me that I never feel loniless again. But, I'm here again between an empty soul and a room full of memories.

Maybe you've been here before. Take a wish and put your hands around me, tonight we need to scape of this death memories house. Before the time touch the only things that we have... the love.

People always is looking peace trought desert and silence. Cause they think that poems are far of peace. But, would do you think if I tell you that poems it's just a little piece about calm and love? Do you believe me? Or you let me down to run to others arms. Stay with me, that i'm not perfect, but for you I would be whatever you want.

I'll be waiting for you tomorrow, at same time and the same place. For now, i just lay down my arms and forget all pain that you made in the past, just to say: I need you.

Well, i hope you like... And if i made mistake writing this, I don't have any problem to read yours corrections.

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It is all about love. Thanks @earningsonlineve

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