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RE: Aesir [Original Novel] Ragnarok Conspiracy (43/44)

in #writing7 years ago

Fenrir and it's crew seemed quite unscaled so far, in fact, the wolf ship seemed even more fears than when Bjarne and his crew left the Galaxy to get help, but against such forces, how long could they truly last. There already were half a dozen ape like Jötnar holding on to the underbelly of the giant wolf.

unscaled -> unscathed
fears -> fearsome
help, but -> help. But
last. -> last?
ape like -> ape-like

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