Bjarne himself was a wizard now. Thanks to a futuristic cranial augmentation that put the power of the quantum trinity at his fingertips so to speak. But then, it wasn't just him. The ship, Sleipnir, was the sentient steed of the gods. A steed that normally no mere mortal man could master and he wouldn't have either, in fact, he hadn't.

now. Thanks -> now, thanks
fingertips so -> fingertips, so
then, -> then again,
either, -> either;

But then for the M-Brane folding. That part wasn't quite part of the harmony.

But then -> As
folding. That -> folding, that