Is it the beginning of a story or a character study? It drew me in, that's for sure.
I used to write more, fiction and studies etc, but the good thing about being a painter is I simply took my story ideas and made them into paintings, the editing is less stressful then red pen and 2nd drafts ;)
Keep writing!
You make truly lovely stories through your craft, mine would look like reservoir dogs stick men.
Well, now I want to see reservoir dog stick men, so you've gone and given yourself a challenge. :)
Challenge accepted😄