Jazz, this is a beautiful story! It was short, simple, but full of emotions. Makes me wonder how it feels to live that long! I also see much of your personality in the characters! I know you're an old soul, and you like Jazz music. And that side of you somehow manifested in this story. I have a feeling you play saxophone and are good with it. :D
Anyway, this is another pasabog from you. I hope we could read more of those stories you never had confidence sharing! You are really good at this! Have more confidence in your talent! :D
Thanks for reading, Maine. Wow, you understood a lot from the story. Yeah, it seems I've unknowingly injected aspects of my personality in the characters haha: Siegfried's wisdom, Columba's exhaustion, and Zalman's optimism. I did not realize it before. But I'm still no good with instruments haha.
Thanks for the support and for really digesting the story!
Moreover, what I really like about your stories is that they have depth. May lalim eh! Di xa for entertainment lang. Nakakapag contemplate na lang aq bigla, alam mo un! ahahaha.
This is my second favorite story from you, the "Bulag sa Laws (ano tagalog ulit)" being the first. Post mo na kasi ung iba Jazz!
Haha, narecall mo pa yun "Bulag na Batas" :D Salamat. Cheret lang yun marami ako baong kwento. Puro mga hindi ko pa nasusulat haha.
Grabe, pati batas di q naisip. Lol! Oo naman. Ang tindi kaya nun.
Ikaw ang nang checheret! Alam q marami ka pang nakabaong...kayamanan! Ilabas mo na yan! Hahahaha!