Hey! Work is cramping my style but I'm about to catch up on my reading! I enjoy the way your tale transitions to the backstory from that awesome first chapter!
Again you leave your readers with the urge to turn the page to find out if there's going to be a snowball fight of a fist fight! Great stuff right here!
Awesome! Thank you for the feedback!
I have to attend one more workshop and then I'll know more about the direction I'll be taking with this.
I'll let you know how it goes 😊