That’s a great first chapter! It leaves the reader with mysterious unanswered questions that urges a page turn to find out 1. What sort of security does Zack provide 2. Why is he working for a mobster? 3. Will his new business be legitimate... etc. Psychologically captures your reader! This starts out with a BANG!
Oh, thanks for the shout out too! I appreciate the exposure!
Thank you! I'm pleased you like the story. I'm getting to grips with Grammarly. Thanks for that!
Indeed! Grammarly is a
veryuseful tool for writers!