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RE: How I edit my own work - Plus a story to read too - 8
I am looking forward to see how this works, is she going to have to defeat him in those three forms as a corporeal being? or will she do it on the plane of reality? Either way, it is going to be fun seeing how it is done. I like the expanded edit version, it felt more filled in.
All will be revealed... ;)