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RE: The Perfect Ghost

in #writing7 years ago

The first paragraph sounds like a fantasy, a longing or a wish but with the crossed words, it depicted a past desire; matching into a single expression someone who had existed and also wanting someone in your imagination.
Paragraph 2 and 4 only made us to realise that it was only a dream...."Que triste"
To make matters worse, he wasn't anywhere in your city. Maybe you need to go to another city or he maybe right here in my city...you never know.
All the best finding your dream man though.
Nice write-up.

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Haha. Maybe he's just stuck in my head :)

Thank you for your read!

It's a beautiful thing you have got stucked up in your head.

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