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RE: I’m sorry you were too young [New Writing]
Great poem @lauraorigin. Though very plane in the language, it was deep in its reflection. Sometimes I sin as a writer (or poet, if I may), because I tend to overcomplicate things. Your poem remind me that sometimes the best art is the one with a universal message. Cheers from México!
Hi @alonsomath , thank you for mentioning that! Full disclosure: I do often find myself looking for the perfect word far too long as well;).
I recently went through everything I've ever posted online, and I noticed the 'first version' (aka with less attention to detail and more use of 'simple language' to express something) always gained the most/best response actually... (Posted on various platforms, with no strict order to where I posted what version btw)
'Beauty in Simplicity' I guess ;) Looking forward to read your work later on btw!
I'll definetly consider that experience from you :)
Thanks to you!