Word poetry challenge #8 : sunset

in #wordchallenge6 years ago

SUNSET
from dawn to dusk,
say something am giving up,
watched how my sunrise became sunset
same as how being turns to being dead,
remembered how we watched the skies together,
how being by your side neabs the world to me but not anymore,
where i looked into the sky,
and you told me it was nothing compared to the colors of my eyes,
i remembered,
it's been four years already,
four years since you walked away,
four years since i had to spend summer spring and winter alone,
four years we roamed the city at sunset like night walkers,

but now what i've been hanging on to none of them feels like home anymore,
just as been said "when the sun has set, no candle can replace it"
oh sunlight! the most precious gold tobe found

dusk is just an illusion because the sun is either abovee the horizon or below it,
how wuld it feel i remember wondering to be always together yet forever apart.

FOUR YEARS NOW, MY SUNSET IS STILL BELOW THE HORIZON.

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