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RE: Age of Adepts-- Chapter 160- Departing -(Unedited)
Not everyone have English as their first language. Mind if you point out where is the grammar is misused? I will fix. I do not have an editor so if you grammar is good do you mind helping?
[ "Well, what can be done? Signing a contract and throw them to the battlefield. Originally this errand is Anderson's share since Anderson is gone, let them three takes his place.If THEY LIVE then they can naturally enjoy the treatment of family, if they die then they can just blame their life is not good enough! "
Heard THOSE words, Green and the others were disappointed but was also relieved. ]
I'm not good at english too but i will try to help! thank you very much for picking this!
Thanks! Fixed it.