speechless! in a good way :-)
@immortalpoet, this is POWERFUL. i hope it goes far and wide.
as a matter of fact, you may want to enter it in the Steem Poetry Slam. the deadline is midnight tonight. if you're interested (i think this piece would have a great chance at winning/placing), just add "steempoetryslam" as a tag, and also include it in your title.