I thank you for your contribution. Here are my thoughts. Note that, my thoughts are my personal ideas on your post and they are not directly related to the review and scoring unlike the answers I gave in the questionnaire;

• Structure

  • I advise you to consider using paragraphs. Separating each sentence with a blank line makes it harder to read and understand.

  • It's hard to figure out which part does what. So, I advise you using headers to categorize the post. You talked about 3 major concepts at the beginning. Simply writing each with a header would make it easier to read.

• Language

  • Some of your sentences are artificial. This makes them hard to read and understand. To overcome that, I advise you to check the structure of your sentences. For example, using "we"/"you" for each sentence in the post makes it boring to read. Here is an example sentence:

    • "The first thing we'll be doing today is adding the data base to our server-side."

    Instead of the one above, you can use the below one.

    • "First part of this tutorial is adding a database to server-side."

    As you can see, removing persons from the sentence made it look more natural. You can improve it by rewriting sentences after doing this and repeating the same process if necessary.

  • There are some sentences which are hard to understand because of the vocabulary and grammar. I advise you to proofread your posts before posting. It can increase the efficiency of your post.

• Content

  • What you really have shown is doing it by yourself, not teaching. I advise you to change this approach to increase teaching efficiency. Here is an example:

    • "After this, create a new folder in the root directory of your folder and create a file called db.js
      In this file link your created database like this"

    This sentence just says what to do, so it reduces the efficiency by implying user that the way you show is the only way to accomplish that.

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