I thank you for your contribution. Here are my thoughts. Note that, my thoughts are my personal ideas on your post and they are not directly related to the review and scoring unlike the answers I gave in the questionnaire;

• Structure

  • Structure of your posts are well done in general. I appreciate it.

• Language

  • The language was better than the last one I reviewed, so I also appreciate that. Still, I prefer and suggest the usage of the third person in any article and tutorial. So, here is a reference:
    https://www.stlcc.edu/docs/student-support/academic-support/college-writing-center/point-of-view-in-academic-writing.pdf

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