Sorry for the delay. I couldn't post the draft it seems.
I thank you for your contribution. Here are my thoughts. Note that, my thoughts are my personal ideas on your post and they are not directly related to the review and scoring unlike the answers I gave in the questionnaire;

• Language

  • I personally think the usage of the first person reduces the efficiency of the post. I advise you to consider using less first person.

• Content

  • Although what you write is good, it is a simple physics lesson at the moment. As you are starting from scratch, it is okay. I'm interested in the topic, I'll see where it goes.

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