I thank you for your contribution. Here are my thoughts. Note that, my thoughts are my personal ideas on your post and they are not directly related to the review and scoring unlike the answers I gave in the questionnaire;

• Structure

  • The overall structure of your video is good as it was before. I appreciate your effort on that.

• Language

  • There were some sentences of yours which were structurally broken. It is okay but I just wanted to state it.

  • I managed to understand your tutorial in 2x speed, but still; sometimes it becomes hard to comprehend what you say. It will improve in time and it did. I see good effort on that.

• Content

  • I suggest considering other free paint programs, which smooths out the brushes. When you draw with this one, it looks ugly from my perspective. It's not a big deal but just consider it.

  • Even you try to simplify things as you teach the concepts, what you've done in the video is an anti-pattern. You are using exceptions for flow-control, which is a bad habit. You can do everything you did with exceptions purely using ifs, switches and returns. Exceptions are required when unpredictable, not expected things happen; so try to use them that way.

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