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RE: Review of Frost-for-Facebook

in #utopian-io5 years ago (edited)

This is a comprehensive review from you. The post details the app's benefits and your experiences with it. I agree with your views, and I may try the app.

You did great on the content side. The post is extensive, well illustrated, and informative. However, there are areas where you could do better.

First, the side by side images are aligned with the texts, but the single images do not fit in properly. I think it would be better to have the single images placed in the center. Also, in your resources section, you claimed that all images used are your mobile screenshots. What about the first image? That does not look like a mobile screenshot, but the image is not properly sourced.

Also, the writing had issues. Aside from grammar and style, there are quite a few omissions, and some wrong phrased sentences. I will cite an example.

Another great feature but in included on Facebook app. But with Frost, I'm able to watch videos and go through other pages by enabling the PIP icon.

That is not clear. There are more similar issues in the post. I would advise you to dedicate more time to proofread your texts correctly.

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Thanks for your review. The first Image is cropped from the full image of my screenshot.

Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!

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