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RE: Night Screen App Protects Your Vision Against Artificial Blue Light Emission From Mobile Phones

in #utopian-io6 years ago

Hi Autofreak, thank you for the contribution.

The post details the app benefits and your personal experiences. I even value your thoughts on how the project could be better. Those ideas are useful, and I suggest you submit them on the project repository for the PO to have a glimpse.

On the presentation, I'm happy to see the structure and well-separated paragraphs. However, the writing still needs a rework. There are grammar and punctuation errors. I'd suggest you check for issues in your texts thoroughly before publishing.

Thanks!

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Thank you, I will continue to improve.

Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!

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