RE: QUIQQER week in review - 2019 / 12
Hello!
I will cite a few examples for you:
We are back again with a weekly report what happened in the QUIQQER universe.
Let me rephrase that: "We are back again with a weekly report of what happened in the QUIQQER universe."
Each possibility to observe different logins reminds like searching for the needle in the haystack.
This would be a better sentence: "Each possibility to observe different logins feels like searching for the needle in the haystack."
Even if this means more stress for us, we test our software on our own body and have no other choice as to fix it and make it executable.
This sentence would be a better sentence: "Even though this means more stress for us, we test our software on our own body, and have no other choice but to fix it and make it executable."
I hope you will find this comment useful.