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RE: **HEDE: The Wikipedia of our time. [Part One]**

in #utopian-io6 years ago

This is certainly an extensive first part of a review. We like the folks working on Hede, and are always happy to see posts about it.

That said, I had some issues with your posts, where I think you can make your work better.

The post consistently confuses Steem and Steemit. Steem is the platform, the blockchain. Steemit is a condenser for Steem, much like Hede, except it's a comprehensive condenser. There are others, such as Busy and Steempeak.

For instance:

because the HEDE blockchain platform is linked to Steemit, it may have a different policy for payouts for the received upvotes. That is a false thing to believe as the payouts don’t occur on HEDE but actually occurs on the Steemit platform itself.

Hede isn't a blockchain platform. It's a decentralized app running on the Steem blockchain. The payouts don't happen on Steemit, they happen on Steem.

You also frequently use "he" as a default pronoun. The male pronoun should not be used as a default, as that is excluding to women and non binary folks. I would suggest using the singular they, or avoiding pronouns altogether.

I would strongly recommend running future posts through Hemingway, to see some of the potential issues.

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Understood Sir, thanks for the corrections Mr @Didic

Thank you for your review, @didic!

So far this week you've reviewed 1 contributions. Keep up the good work!

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