This is a great update to the app, with much appreciated fixes and additions. As someone who installed it when it was released, I'm very happy to see the work continuing.

I had some issues with the posts, both in regards to content, and in regards to presentation. So let's talk about that.

When it comes to content, I would want to see more of it. For someone coming into this post as their first time hearing about 1Ramp, this is super confusing. The "What is 1Ramp" section can't be at the end. Most people who don't know will never make it to that section. It is also quite thin. A deeper, more detailed explanation would have been useful.

As to the presentation side, let's start with the positive: The visuals you used are top notch. Those little animations are super helpful!

The text is, for the most part, okay. But, as I said, I had some issues. Let's cite some examples:

• "Ever since, we are receiving." "We are" is something that is happening right now. When you're talking about something that started in the past and is still ongoing, the correct form is "we have been."

• "from the last and this latest update (V0.0.13)." It took me a while to figure out what this even means. That's because you used "and" when you should have used "to." Also, moving "update" would help: "from the last update to this latest one (V0.0.13)."

• "Now you can reply on comments" Would be better as "You can now reply to comments."

Issues such as these mar this otherwise excellent update. You can do better.

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