RE: Working with openWISP in Google Code-In 2017
Thank you for your contribution to Utopian.
I appreciate the personal story, but had some pointers for improvement, if you wish future posts to be better.
Your post tells the reader almost nothing about OpenWISP. While we always appreciate personal content, it should accompany information and opinion. It should have meaning beyond your personal experiences.
For instance, when you create an open source application, telling us that app's story will be interesting and engaging, especially when combined with the personal side.
On the presentation side, you'd be well served by separating your paragraphs, and writing shorter ones. The way the content is presented now, as a wall of text, makes it harder for readers to get through. Always remember that your goal is to make your writing clear, so your content can shine through.
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Should I edit this post to match your valuable advice, would it be accepted?
Or do I just have to include those pointers in my next post?
As we can't have our moderators re-checking posts, reviews are final. The comments are there to help make your next contributions better.
Thank you for your review, @didic! Keep up the good work!