Thanks for your comment and evaluation, I loved how you started with a prasing the post's good points.

I agree with all of the answers the only one I was disappointed at was the first "below average." But even while I'm honestly disappointed, This made me want to learn how to master the quality of my post. If you can tell me the other areas I'm weak at, please do.

On the content side, you mention that there are other open source twine games, but don't mention what they are or talk about them in any meaningful way.

Thanks, I'll research more on that matter, will the evaluation change if I added them?

your post had some issues of style and grammar. If you like, I can give some examples in a follow-up comment.

Please show me examples, English isn't my first language so obvious facts may be unknown to me.