Grammar in Poetry. ..

Lord I give you my heart, I give you my soul. Lord have your way in me.......
Sure He would, but it funny how we, given Him our hearts and still have it to ourselves in our minds, we think and brood on His will but our hands are up and about, doing ours... playing another song...

I surrender all, I surrender all......
Yes we have, but is it all or most, telling God I'll never steal, cheat, kill, but still some times led by the things we see and consumed by feelings like Lord, I hope you cut me some slacks to step on toes of those who Bruises my skin... I like this one

I won't go back won't go back to the way it used to be....
Used to be was us with the wheels, now He drives but those sides attractions arouses our imaginations, without the mind guard, we entertain pictures of what past used to be...

For we should mean every word that we say to Him..
Our reverence to God in awe is not an act, but inherent attitude stimulated by passion, for it's not an event, but a lifestyle we need to vent, not a religion with rules of dos and don'ts but a reunion of tightened screws locking us to Christ the groom in love where He enlarges us with His own fronts....
Who said the Christian race, road to heaven would be easy, because We want to serve Him with comfort based on our own understanding, listing rights as task to do to make us rightly standing but it's living His life that makes us really outstanding, in the Christian faith with the Holy Spirit by our side...
for we want Him to take over but still in a battle to put down the flesh controller, although we long for Him to step in like the Rangers, we sit in-to a couch with our eyes comfortably glued to this T-V station in a house that is not our real home, talking about this world..... It like waiting to be picked up by a bus in the darkest of desert where there isn't a bus station, talking about procrastination ...
Let me speak English, so you understand how our identity as nouns has been less defined, hidden in pronouns,due to the preposition of distracting objects, which serves as interjections, having no soul quickening value, rather than the Bible giving the superlative adjective about us, and the Holy Spirit becoming the definite determiner who's been made our quantifier, we put buds in our ears, blocking His active voice saying God has far prepared a better place than earth for us, for we hide behind the negative question tagged board to our face against His positive statement that says we have been made to live solely for His name...

For Christ is THE, perfect, Definite article who brought back the conjunction between God and man, by one act, salvation, which is totally complete but tends to be a phrase without us the subject and the verb word accept, to meet...
we are limiting God when we the created tend to think we know best for our selves than He the creator, occupying our minds with questions in doubts, debating God's will and purpose in tense emotions, think not of tomorrow, it takes care of itself, but still we worry, man's ideology of God's promises makes some future tense as they are feeling depressed, in curiosity they ask, will He do it.. Or rather some, in their present continuous tense will ask, is He doing it, but knowing all that God is about, His workings leads to the understanding of His authentic architectural plan having the strongest foundation of His son's blood, on which the new born we are, stands on, for the new creation beings knows it's meaningless to ask or even still feel the tense of what is past perfect, like, Has He done it? For Christ had said on that crucifixion cross, "it is finished" this is a direct reported speech .. So we know that it's already been perfected.....
So Let's stop of our own efforts of struggling and trying, let Him take over, completely being the Lord of our lives, nothing secondary to Him except praise, love, loyalty, fully yielding Him our body, mind and soul in total worship, a life of faith in God is only what pleases, He didn't hire us to work for Him Cus we are one with Him, partners, He didn't call us to live for less but live to bless as blessings, we weren't chosen in His team as side liners but, defenders of the Gospel and strikers, it's time to end the double dating, our lips kissing heaven in Glory the same cursing men in scorning.. The mind needs to be made up to go the extra mile, dropping all the hard ware that slows us down, the hands needs to completely go into His plough, and the body needs to faithfully keep its vow....
What you see you become, your gaze looking unto Jesus, because those that focus on the sun, don't see the shadows....

Don't wallow in self-pity thinking, will I ever be good enough, don't doubt or question the abilities He has putted inside of you, you weren't made to be just good i mean, because you are the best, so come out of the roller coaster life ride of self-will, bitterness, fear birthed by uncertainties, no more anger, timidity or feeling like square stems with round roots, because, you have the best halves, God, Jesus, the holy spirit, you making up the quadruplet. ..
in this happy, perfect family that you have been the adopted, should not have to bother with inferiority complex, or being scared for The revelation of the word is piloting us, we are doers of the word and not Obeyers, no longer to live according to the detects of our body, but live out the word for we are superior beings with Christ who has given us light being the very life we live col 3:4...
God is in Christ, and Christ is in us , He is so proud of us and want the world to know that we are His epistles sent to this nation as the light of the world.. For this should be more real to you in your spirit than your gender as you chin up, man up, and live up for and in His Glory in total worship declaring His message boldly, so at the end when your accounts is being read, as simple as the branches of English is, as you have seen, so will the chronicles of your life's worship tell that you lived every bit of your life knowing that in Him, you were long been perfected in Grace, which is far above laws and flaws....