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RE: #ulog (DAY1): TRAVELING TO NORTH
You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:
As you go up closer to the shrine its very exciting and relaxing because as you go up you'll see the surroundings covered with tree's and mountains and a warm fresh air is gently touching your the skin that feels so relaxing.It should be you're the instead of your the.