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RE: WORLD TRAVEL REPORT "PARADISE HOT SPOT" : LAKE ATITLAN, GUATEMALA
Just resteemed your article. Very nice. From an English teachers perspective, with years of experience.....I'd recommend tightening up your articles. Cut out some the wordy-ness and excessive details, go right to your points. Just my opinion, and hate to be critical, your info and post overall is solid. Thanks for sharing.
I tend to write a lot in whatever language (International Baccalaureate taught me this) so I see what you're meaning!!
The fact that you can speak more than one language says a lot! I'm just trying to help, that's all. Keep up the good work!