I did an upvote, but only so as to show you I am not being nasty when I tell you what is wrong with your post.

It is beautiful and well laid out, but to me it resembles a travel brochure.

Add something personal. it is what steemians feast on. They will want to know what made you choose this island, apart from the beauty. Have you, as a teenager, romantisised about it, or did you read a story with information about the island that made you wish you could visit? Since your home page does not mention where you come from, for all I know you live there.

Feed the curiosity of others and people will learn about you and come to ask questions and hopefully want to be friends.

Just think of this fact - if you are not willing to open up to let anyone here know you, why should they open up to you?

Friendships is what will bring you all you dream of, not just lovely posts.