Poetry: OCEAN OF TEARS (To My LDR Fiance')

in #tilphilippines7 years ago (edited)

Ocean of Tears

Boy do you hear?
How much I need you here?
Don't want to live in fear,
I wish you are safe, my dear.

I can't battle the distance
If I would, I'd grab the chance.
I'd walk, I'd fly.
Everything I would try.

Oh these tears I cry,
It can never run dry.
My heart feels so blue
Baby this is true.

To you for years, I long.
To you, promised I belong.
I'd swim this ocean of tears,
That separates us for years.

We sacrificed
to make our future better.
They criticized
We'll be a torn, forgotten letter.

But we proved them wrong
We only grown strong.

Soon please come back,
You're the only one I lack.
To you, I'd keep my faith.
Forever I will wait.
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Words and Photo by @queenie48

Photo is mine

The story behind this poem is about us. My boyfriend/fiance' is living in Canada while I'm here at the Philippines. It will take 3 to 4 years more before we meet each other again. We've been together for almost 4 years. We survived through a strong communication, trust and support for each other. Loving someone at the other side of the world is not that easy but you have to stay strong and firm to your promises and goals. This painful sacrifice is only a little thing compared to the upcoming happiness with your loved one someday.

So far, we're still carrying on no matter how hard it is sometimes.
To anyone out there whose love is abroad, don't give up! Just have faith.
We can do this!

Check out my other poems:
BREAK FREE
BLOOM AGAIN
HOLLOW
SHE LEFT ME

Thank you for always helping Sir @iyanpol12 and @wagun001.
I would also like to thank Sir @surpassinggoogle and @bayanihan for supporting Filipino aspiring poets!
Godbless!

Thank you for reading and for your support!
Til next time.

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Wonderful poem @queenie48, I can easily imagine sung and strum on a guitar. Long distant relationships are hard, I've been in a few myself. I wish you strength to carry on and hope you two will have holidays or times to see each other again.
Your drawing is also lovely too. You two are beautiful together <3

I was actually planning to make this into a song, and sing it to him. Thank you for appreciating too.

Beautiful poem.
Steem On!
Enjoy your stay here:)

Take some imaginary @teardrops (Smart Media Tokens)

Thank you Sir :)

It's so hard coping up with distance in a relationship

I know very well :)

Be strong :)

Nice poem. Don't worry, time will let you meet again.

"I'm a newbie and I make poetry and stuff in English and Tagalog. I would really appreciate it if you give me a time and visit and read my crafts. Thanks :)"

Aww. That's one of the hardest part of being in a relationship. Just keep holding on to it! I cannot imagine myself not seeing my boyfriend that long. But be strong and let His Love be with you both!

What a nice poem po. How I wish na we will see more of your creation. And stay strong po sa relationship niyo.

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