Poetry: Hollow
HOLLOW
by @queenie48
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I don't know where this will go,
I'll just write to let you know.
That lately, differently the wind blow,
You said our hearts, apart it grow.
What went wrong?
It's you I waited so long.
You whom I think I belong.
Why must you change the love of our song?
The sky has changed,
and your love deranged.
You blew out the flame.
Who is it to blame?
For you, now it's lame.
Even so, I still love you the same.
Why can't you see?
Why must you close your eyes?
Why must you turn your back?
Why must we stop?
Your warm and cozy hug,
Your kisses on the mug.
Why must you leave me here?
Oh, I really miss you dear.
Now my heart is hollow.
You were once my mellow.
I can't bare to hear.
The truth that you ain't here.
Words and photo by @queenie48
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What will you do when you're drifting apart? How can you fight for someone who already gave up?
Would you still hold on if they let go of you already?
Will you miss the person, the love or just the idea of being with them?
Which one will you keep? the person without the love? or the love without the person?
That's all for today!
Check out my other poems:
SHE LEFT ME
BLOOM AGAIN
BREAK FREE
I would like to thank Sir @iyanpol12 for always helping us.
And Sir @surpassinggoogle and @bayanihan for noticing my posts last time :)
Thank you for reading!
Wow! Is that your drawing?
Yes it is, sir :)
Pretty it is. Hugging someone is one of the best feeling in this world. <3
It is calming. Yet destructive too.
Destructive?
Didn't get this point! Can you please explain?
Hmmm. It's more of a negative view. I'll just give a scenario haha.
For example your lover cheated and lied to you, then they'll go home, gave you a hug and pretended like nothing's wrong. That hug can destroy you because you've known he made a mistake and hurt you then they have the guts to act sweet and fool you like that?
Hahaha I am so sorry. This scenario is from the story I wrote a long time ago. It destroyed the girl.
Haha alright. I understood what you wanna say. Thanks.
Cute is when a person's personality shines through their looks. Like in the way they walk, every time you see them you just want to run up and hug them.
Don't let go of that kind of person.
Absolutely not let him go. Thanks for feedback.
The love without the person. His happiness is not within you, so why force the someone stays in your arms if that someone has its new.
You're right Ma'am. But some people don't realize that and still hold on.
You are a talented artist, ma'am... Talented with the words and talented with the sketch. Thank you for sharing
Everyone is talented too. Thank you for appreciating.