Very interesting and thought provoking. When I begin to read a new book, I can pretty much tell, after the first few pages, if the author is descriptive enough to draw me to full attention. To make me imagine where this story is taking place, the scenery, time period. But also the character building and the dialogue, which is essential.
It's amazing how we can look, but not see when our focus is on just one thing mentally. I counted 15 passes, but I never saw the gorilla. Point made.