I clicked because of the first one, which is an obvious truth, but I would like to see your sources. Where did you get this information from? Link them in your writings, it gives them more weight. Make sure to source the pictures too, to avoid being flagged for plagiarism. Also, Perhaps some brushing up on formatting and proofreading. Your numbering is off, and the margins are a bit wonky. Not knocking your writing at all. I like it. Just needs a bit of polish. :)