RE: The story in series: Chapter One
~ZOE IN PANIC, MARCUS IN PAIN~
Zoe still yelling his name got worried and thought of the worst. The What if questions popped up in her head like unwanted web-ads.
What if he broke a leg, What if he is dead...What if he is....
A faint sound came from below like he was struggling to wake up from a deep sleep.
Marcus! Marcus!
She called out his name.
At this time the sheep had left to return to the flock as a result of the rumble... well hopefully.
She called his name once more.
Yes Zoe... A sigh of relief from Zoe.
Marcus said in humor; were you worried about me .
not realizing where he is , for he could not see.
the darkness below was thick, so he requested for Zoe to throw down her phone so he could use its flash light.
Marcus tried to get up... shit!
What is it? Zoe asked. My left leg is broken, I'm in pains. Grunting has he tried to stand up.
Good grief!
A perfect rod was lying on the floor right beside him which he used to assist himself to stand up.
Where Am I
He was quick to his feet. Now to find a way out. Using the flash light, he scanned the cave.
There were human bones all over the place. All dry and old.
it must have been here for centuries. walking through in the dark dungeon.
he found a metal door with a writing on the walk at the entrance. he was marveled. A door in the middle of an abandoned cave. has he waved his flash light. he saw another door also with a writing at the entrance.
Door 1
whoever sees any of these doors MUST enter
If you choose to enter you will not remember the last 24 hours. You will be returned to a time in the last 24 hours where you were most comfortable
Door 2
Whoever chooses to enter will tap into an unimaginable power.
If you choose to enter you will not remember the last 24 hours. You will jump to a time 24 hours from now without having any knowledge of the time lapse
you have 10 seconds to make a decision or all living creatures in this cave dies
There was no time to think.
He dashed into a door
~Now What~
Just playing around with the characters and set...I can't wait for the next part ;)
Thank you @dante31 for your input!!
You left me with a huge "Now what" there, didn't you?? Hahaha! Well, if you win I'll continue the story further than that, if you don't mind. It is a great point to stop, huge cliffhanger, but I think the chapter will then be too short, no?
Also, loving the whole "you've got 10 seconds to decide" thing and the bone littered cave!
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