This proposal is definitely unique. I heard you were going to post a more complete one soon. I find your proposal is all over the place and scattered. Voting is really soon and it is difficult to consider this one at the moment. I hope you definitely advise which ever proposal makes it.
Maybe a few graphics or organized headings would be great. It's just so hard to digest.
Thank you after writing various posts to try explain the concept, Finally some feedback. I will get on trying to define it clearer. If there is any specific questions you may have. Please question me.
Sincerely, Thank you.
Tom.
I understand the core will have 10-12 committees below it. You mentioned you want to get into the energy business which is neat but I don't see this being 1 of the first 12. I think you should provide more viable options of what some of these 12 committees should be. Also mentioning paid roles is going to be a definite no for a lot of people who noticed Steem Inc did end up laying off the majority of their paid staff. However, it does make your idea stand out and different.
https://steemit.com/foundationproposal/@thehive/final-cut-proposal