The challenges of @bananafish are getting bigger and that makes me excited. I have a split vote between @jadams2k18 and @gaby-crb. Both stories have a clean, fluid and deceptive narrative and their literary structures are attractive. The end of Mr. Okubo was obvious and there are two narrative planes: the narrator and the character, like a movie; while Earth's Cavity: A Life Below captures from the beginning and is impeccable the development of the story with spaces for prose.