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RE: short stories #8
I understood she changed and that is why it makes me sad you still call her a monster in the end.
She was not a monster in the first place but a monstrous deed was done to her and she was the victim and punished for it. And even after she changed she is still the monster!
I guess that is how people act and think. Victims are there to blame, if they change because of what happened to them they are a monster, if they change into the sweet person again they once were they still have the label of the monster.
And the one who caused this all?
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Yeah I completely agree with you! I'm amazed because you litteraly share the same ideas with me. Actually, I kept calling her a monster even at the end because I wanted to shedd light on what's really hapenning among humans. We always judge the person before knowing his dark past. As far as I'm concerned, there's no real criminal because a bad society is the one to give birth to such people. And moreover, the revenge is a nature in humanbeing. You know what. I did have empathy toward the lost soul more than I did toward Anne. Because that exactly what happens when we don't give new chances to persons like The little girl who was murdered in the story, she only wanted someone to understand her and treat her well unlike her father. On the other hand, if someone has a short vision to things in life, he would feel that Anne is the real victim.
Well said. Your story will hopefully make people think and who knows even discuss like we do now.
Might be the fact you did call her a monster will make them ask/wonder why or feel sad like it does to me.
Human kind is hard and only sees what it likes to see. That is a dangerous thing and why gossiping works. We see it in our daily life, it's so easy to accuse but if it turns out to be wrong the bad name exists.
I write with prisoners. Frequently.discus this with my children. You did something wrong, you are punished but no way you van ever make what was wrong right. You will always stay the thief, molester, murderer, etc.
Once labelled...
So, what is the use of punishment if no one will ever trust you again? If you stay the pariah? 🤔
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Thank you so much I really appreciate your ideas, your feedback and furthermore your advice. Because as you said, unfortunately I'am always running out of SP. I didn't know how to get SP before you told me this. That's why thank you so much. And you know @wakeupkitty if only the others who upvoted my story had dicussed with us their ideas, their point of view as well. Because the main purpose of writing these short stories is not just for fun , I really want to send subliminal messages throughout the lines so that people start discussing and shedd light on essential life's topics