Really enjoyed this one and liked the concept of it "awakening" so it will be interesting to see where the story goes. For your second language you probably write better English than me and its my first lol

Keep sharing for sure and don't be nervous just chip away and release it. Steemit is a great place to try things out to see who is interested and build a following. I will reread again later and see if there is anything that stands out from a "native" speaker side of things. First read through I had no problems at all following along so don't think you will have any real issues.