Loved the ending of this story @florae. I like anything gory or horror style but beyond my personal taste I think you really captured the horror well with your words:

I heard the sound of squeaking metal which drew my eyes to Otedola’s side. His face… it was twisted… frozen in a snickering grin, mouth wide, teeth black, and he was crying, but his tears were black and he had horns “this isn’t real ‘I thought ‘.

As in this section. It has a surreal sense of disbelief to it. Creepy :-)