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RE: Short fiction- Surviving

in #story7 years ago

A very good read, I kind of spoiled it for myself a bit by having seen the line

She has more than a hundred messages. "Take me home."

So I was waiting in anticipation for the point at which it changes, and was relieved to find that nowhere before the twist there were any real indicators of something changing.

Enjoyed it a lot.

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Thank you! Do you also spoils movies by watching the end first?!?!

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